After recieving feedback from out first storyboard draft we learned our main problem was that we needed to include more cut a way shots. We learned that this was especially the case with Alfie's character in Scene 1. More shots of Alfie pouring petrol would be neccessary and then switching inbetween shots of Marie And Johnny getting closer to the action.
Therefore only two more storyboard sheets needed to be added before we had our final draft.we also included a few more shots during scene 3 and scene 4 to represent the action in the flashbacks happening over time and how the rleationship between marie and alfie.
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